I received my summer blogs back today from Mr. Delacruz. I
have to say I am disappointed on how they turned out. I thought I performed
better than what my grade represents. While it is not a bad grade, I was just
hoping it would be higher. I can deduce that maybe it was the summer heat that
drained my brain of any English coherence and spark? Looking back on summer
now, I had so much free time compared to the school year! How could I have not
dedicated more time to my blogs?
I am also very disappointed in myself in regards to the
extra credit that was offered during the summer reading blog. I failed to do
it! Had I known it would account for 100 additional points, I would’ve been all
over it! I suppose I can once again blame the lethargy and heat of the summer
on my failure to accrue a large chunk of extra points on the summer blog
assignment. What a shame.
Despite my disappointment over my summer reading blog grade,
I enjoyed looking over the different poems that were based off the Norman
Morrison incident. Out of the three poems we looked at, I liked Adrian’s
Mitchell’s work the best. I felt so much passion in his writing. He begins the
pome titled Norman Morrison with the
sarcastic line “United beautiful States of terrible America”. He turns this
common phrase into a more ironic sequence of words as he shows Morrison’s
disrespect for the US Government and their involvement in Vietnam. Adrian
Mitchell then goes on to say Morrison’s publicized burning represents all of
the undocumented burning in Vietnam when he writes, “He did it in Washington
where everyone could see because people were being set on fire in the dark
corners of Vietnam where nobody could see.” In this line, Morrison becomes a
symbol of those who have been set ablaze in Vietnam.
Mitchell beautifully wraps up his poem with the sentence,
“He simply burned away his clothes, his passport, his pink-tinted skin, put on
a new skin of flame and became Vietnamese.” I believe this to mean in the act
of burning himself, Morrison stripped away all that made him American, and he
became one with the Vietnamese. Morrison was experiencing their pain, and made
his point about Vietnam in a rather passionate, gruesome, and admirable way. I
also noticed that Mitchell did not use an oxford comma in the sequence of
events about Morrison burning himself. What a sly dog! I am going to go ahead
and pat myself on the back for that one.
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